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Another Slope swipe from Amy Sohn

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So, can Park Slopers take a joke?

Absolutely.

And that’s the problem with “Prospect Park West,” Amy Sohn’s just released satiric fiction about four clichés, er, mothers, whose lives go into freefall during a long, hot summer in Park Slope.

The characters in the book are so busy being Gawker archetypes — celebrity mom, sexy bad mom, former lesbian mom, frumpy supermom — that they never take the time to laugh at themselves or make real connections with each other.

And Park Slope is about making connections. You can’t step off your stoop without having a conversation with a neighbor, a friend, a local politician or a stranger.

Sohn, who used to pen a racy — and notorious — sex column in the NY Press, also wrote for the NY Post where she once famously ogled the penis sizes of various local baseball players. As the de-facto anti-Mom of Park Slope, she aroused plenty of ire in her New York Magazine “Mating” column when she wrote:

“Here in my neighborhood, Park Slope, I am constantly encountering insane stay-at-home moms. And I have come to the all-too-un-PC conclusion that stay-at-home motherhood, despite the way our culture lionizes it, is bad for the child and bad for the mom. And bad for society. It’s just plain bad.”

Sohn went on to say that most of the SAHMs she knows are really miserable in a “neurotic, soul crippling, Zoloft-inducing, Yellow Wallpaper-type way.” She also said that they have no opinions and spend their time “talking about poop and pancakes with kale and Veggie Bootie and natural Cheerios versus regular ones.” Nice.

Most shockingly Sohn recommended that college-educated women outsource their childcare:

“Childcare should be the province of immigrant women trying to get a leg up. I do not believe it is ‘better for the child’ to be with his mother. I believe it is better for the child to have a mother with some modicum of a life — whether it’s volunteering, graduate degree, or part-time work.”

So it should come as no surprise that Sohn’s fictional characters are so similar to her public persona, isolated and angry and defining themselves by choices they make about their clothing, their marriages, their parenting styles and their careers.

It’s Park Slope as seen from a blog, not a stoop. And it feels like a sexist war zone where what you wear to shop at Met Food or which stroller you buy is referendum on your worth as a human being.

While the novel is full of jokes at the expense of Park Slope moms, who are savaged by Sohn for being fat, ugly and uninteresting, the book rarely shows anyone having fun or being self-aware.

And speaking of self-awareness, there’s a culture of self-criticism and satire within Park Slope that is alive and well — and completely left out of Sohn’s book. How convenient.

What about Edgy Mother’s Day, an annual literary reading featuring local authors like Mary Morris, Sophia Romero, Jenny Offili, Jill Eisenstadt and, yes, Amy Sohn reading stories about motherhood without sanctimony?

How about satiric bloggers like Blog Nigger and F—ked in Park Slope, the blog with the motto, “Embrace the hate”?

People in Park Slope do, in fact, laugh at themselves and think it’s ridiculous that strollers cost $700. They actually make fun of the Tea Lounge, the Food Co-op and all the other people, places and things mentioned in the book. When the novel works well, it does so because Sohn grounds it in an up-to-date Park Slope landscape.

But what about the places and activities that Sohn doesn’t mention — places that really make Park Slope tick — like the Community Bookstore, Old First Church and Snice; the various book, running, bike and writing groups; the community board, Civic Council and political clubs; cool musical venues like Barbes and Issue Project Room; and essential local landmarks like the Botanic Garden and the Brooklyn Museum?

Amy Sohn’s “Prospect Park West” isn’t the eastern strip of the real Park Slope because her characters lack a sense of humor about themselves and a meaningful connection to their community.

Which isn’t to say that there’s not a lot to satirize about this neighborhood.

Plenty of us are annoyingly obsessed with real estate and celebrity culture.

Many of us watch the sex go out of our marriages as we devote ourselves too vigorously to our children, our jobs and the logistics of our daily lives.

Some of us exhibit strange — and exasperating — parenting habits, like talking incessantly to our children or letting them sleep in our beds until they’re 5.

Yes, Sohn does a good job of satirizing the Food Co-op, a certain strata of frumpy mom, and even the fishbowl culture of Park Slope that sometimes resembles a very small town.

She uses the Park Slope Parents Web site as a great narrative device when Lizzie discovers a post about a couple looking for neighborhood swingers — an actual post from a few years back. In the book, the response on the list-serv is pretty Puritanical, though, in reality, members had a lot of fun with it.

I also appreciate that Sohn puts to bed the sexist notion that sexless marriages are always a woman’s fault. Probably the biggest insight in the book is that men, after fatherhood, become less interested in sex. And it’s not because their wives are a turnoff — but because the pressures they face at work and home are a buzz kill.

“Rebecca saw what she’d been doing wrong all the time: She had been trying to go through the front door when he wanted to be approached from the side. He needed to be approached through the door marked ‘Father’ because the one marked ‘Husband’ was locked.”

But there are also lines in the book that really cross the line, like the one about “adoption being the ultimate form of recycling.”

And there aren’t a lot of Park Slope mommies who dress like Angelina Jolie when they go to the playground.

The real-life Park Slope just isn’t so mean spirited as Sohn’s.

Where’s the warmth and community spirit of moms like Susan Fox and Rachel Mauer, who run Park Slope Parents and Kim Maier, executive director of the Old Stone House?

How about dedicated community leaders like PS 321’s principal Liz Phillips, Bobby Finkelstein, who runs the after-school program at Beth Elohim and Nancy Romer, organizer of the Brooklyn Food Conference?

Or glamorous moms like author Elissa Schappell, who writes the Hot Type column for Vanity Fair; Suzanne Donaldson, photo editor of Glamour Magazine and Kathy Malone, founder of the Brooklyn Indie Market.

This Prospect Park West is made up of really interesting women, with a wide range of interests, passions and styles.

But the other “Prospect Park West” is too busy wanting to be the hit show, “Sexless and the City” or “Actually Very Desperate Housewives” rather than be a true mirror on a neighborhood that is still dying for a real fictive takedown.

In “Prospect Park West,” the characters are at each other’s throats and are only looking out for number one. In other words, they lack a connection to community and the sense of how they affect the world around them.

Louise Crawford, who writes the Smartmom column every week in The Brooklyn Paper, lives in Park Slope, has two kids, is occasionally a living parody, but she always makes connections to her community.

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Tony Vassallo from South Slope says:
While your observations are accurate, it's a shame you wasted so much time and verbiage on Ms. Sohn. She is an opportunist and a terrible writer w/o any creativity. Somehow she has carved out a career by talking about herself --- in her columns at NYP and elsewhere and her autobiographical fiction work.

Put her in the Upper West Side or the Upper East Side and you would get the same tripe.

Put me in any area and I can churn out something that mocks where I live. As with you, I like to participate in my environs and not simply take a step back and smugly and obnoxiously comment on everyone and everything I see.

I just don't get how she's gotten away with this nonsense for so many years. She's vapid and shallow and untalented. But she must have a damn good agent. Also, I'd love to see a current headshot -- not something from the 90's.
Sept. 4, 2009, 2:17 pm
finally from Park Slope says:
Louise,

This is the best thing you have ever written. EVER. Thank you for summing it up PERFECTLY.
Sept. 4, 2009, 2:27 pm
Old Purity from Park Slope says:
I guess Sohn's characterization of said author really hit home, eh?
Sept. 4, 2009, 3:09 pm
Leon Freilich from Park Slope says:
"A living parody"? You're undercutting your own critic? What next--Park Slope's a hopeless joke?

The sport du jour must be sucking up to Sohn.
Sept. 4, 2009, 3:27 pm
Whats The Story Jerry from Bensonhurst says:
Amazing that this article uses the full "N" word, while the good Anglo-Saxon word that rhymes with d-u-c-k is truncated. Nice work, Gersh.
Sept. 4, 2009, 7:40 pm
bob from bob@aol.com says:
"I also appreciate that Sohn puts to bed the sexist notion that sexless marriages are always a woman’s fault. Probably the biggest insight in the book is that men, after fatherhood, become less interested in sex. And it’s not because their wives are a turnoff — but because the pressures they face at work and home are a buzz kill.

Is this really an insight or just wishful thinking....
Sept. 8, 2009, 10 am
Here Before the C-train from Clinton Hill says:
I was struck by the same thing that Whats The Story Jerry observed. It is unbelievable that both the writer and editor find it acceptable to print the fully spell-out, negative and hatred-filled word N***** in the article. Also, while I wouldn't be interested in following a blog created by a person who feels comfortable including that offensive word in his or her title; I would, however, be curious to know what gems of enlightenment Louise Crawford mines from this source.
Sept. 8, 2009, 12:55 pm
charles from other says:
Anyone who uses "connections to her community" with a straight face really needs to be parodied.
Sept. 12, 2009, 4:37 pm
Naomi from Windsor Terrace says:
Regarding the cool things in our community: Don't forget the Park Slope Singers. We're a non-auditioning group that is planning on giving a hell of a concert in January.
Sept. 16, 2009, 11:20 am
joe from Brooklyn says:
Wow! I was turned off by the review, not to the book, which I plan to buy and laugh along with. I will go to a better source to read what the book is about, like Goodreads or PW or Booklist. From this review I could not tell what the book was about. Instead, this review seems to have a long standing personal agenda. Ms Crawford let it all hang out in one big cathartic belch. However, the standards of the Brooklyn Paper are so low and the reviews about well known neighbors who are in the book world so hideous that I am not surprised. Amy Sohn can now join the ranks. Take it as a compliment, Ms Sohn. Small time people seem to populate small time papers. Brooklyn writers need to stay on Ms Crawford's good side until she has published a book herself.
Sept. 20, 2009, 10:12 am
Drago from Brighton beach says:
Sohn wrote for the NY press? what a rag! That says all I need to kn ow about that "writer"
March 9, 2010, 4:52 pm

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